Monday, 18 February 2013

Evaluation for Quench Print Advert


Evaluation:

In my print advert, I have used the appropriate conventions. One of the conventions I have used is a main image which is a purple bottle with wings, a halo and a logo on the bottle. I used the masking tool to make the originally blue bottle purple. This is because the flavour of Quench is apple and blackcurrant and blackcurrants are purple so it was ideal for my bottle to be purple.

 My unique selling point is that it is an energy drink that is low in calories so the use of a halo and wings support this as I intended for the wings to symbolise weightlessness and when you are low in calories you are light. Wings and halos are also closely associated with heaven so it also gives the idea that Quench will taste like heaven; it will taste delicious.

My logo is of pink, glossy lips with ‘Quench’ on top of it in fancy writing. This is ideal because it shows that my target audience are 17-25 year old women. This is due to the fact that most young girls don’t wear make-up so pink glossy lips on a drink won’t appeal to them. ‘Quench’ in fancy letters also hints that it is meant for older females as fancy writing indicates a sense of sophistication which again is what little girls are not.

My slogan is effective because it highlights the unique selling point of my product (low in calories, but high in energy). The colour also matches the colour of the bottle which is good because if I use a colour which has nothing to do with my colour palette (purple, white, blue and pink), it will look odd. If it looks odd, people won’t look at my print advert or buy the drink because my advert will look unprofessional, as I won’t be using one of the conventions needed to make a print advert(colour palette). I used the warp effect on my slogan in order to make the text “smile”. This is effective because it shows that people who drink Quench will be happy.

My background is of a blue sky with white clouds. This matches my main image because heaven is in the sky and the use of angel wings and a halo on my bottle shows that a “sky” background has to be used in order for my print advert to show my unique selling point.

However, there are some things in my print advert which are not very effective. One of these things is the colour of the text “Quench” which is on my logo. This is because the colour of the text is too similar to the colour of the lips which are also part of my logo. This means that “Quench” isn’t very noticeable so if someone saw this advert from afar, they wouldn’t know what it was advertising. To make this better, I can make “Quench” a lighter and brighter colour such as white and outline it with a dark purple border by using text effects. I can also make “Quench” slightly bigger in order to make it more visible.

Another problem is the colour of the lips which are part of my logo. This is because they clash with the colour of the bottle which is purple. To overcome this issue, I need to change the colour of the lips to a darker shade of purple using the masking tool. On the other hand, if I make this change to the lips, I am going to have change the planned outline of the lips (dark purple) to maybe black as the dark purple outline won’t be able to be seen on dark purple lips.

If I make all these changes to my logo, my colour palette will no longer include the colour pink, which is good because pink is quite a girly colour, so is therefore associated with little girls. As my target audience are supposed to be aspirers, they will be more interested in more sophisticated colours such as purple and gold which are both used in my advert.

Monday, 11 February 2013

Quench Print Advert

Dear Ms Morris,
I have used the appropriate conventions for a print advert and I have (hopefully) used the masking tool appropriately and effectively. I have enjoyed doing this task and I've accomplished a lot. Thank you, Khadijat.

Monday, 21 January 2013

Burger King Advert Assessment

By Khadijat Oyeleye
The Burger King Manthem

The song “Manthem” is based on the song “I Am Woman” by Helen Reddy. The original lyrics are about women being strong, powerful and independent. This can be seen when she says “I am woman, hear me roar”. When she says “I am woman”, it shows us that she isn’t just a woman; she is woman and is therefore stronger than one person standing on their own. Saying “hear me roar” makes the audience think of lions which means that women are leaders because lions are commonly known as the kings of the jungle.

The purpose of the song is to show men that women are strong and they don’t have to rely on men to accomplish things in life. This makes Helen Reddy a reformer because she wants the position of women in society to change; women should be viewed as superior and not inferior. This therefore makes “I Am Woman” a feminist song.

Burger King changed the song to show men that it is okay to be the traditional man. This means that they don’t need to care about the clothes they wear and what they look like; they can eat what they want and do what they want (they don’t need to be the modern man and care about health an beauty).

The Burger King Manthem will appeal to men because men will no longer have to attempt to be something they’re not as they can live up to the original stereotype of men being ignorant.

The Technique Used to Advertise BK Burgers

The main technique used in the BK advert is humour. This is because the men in the advert were being quite foolish- they were throwing a car off a building and they were ripping their pants off. This makes them seem childish but they’re living up to the stereotype of the traditional man. This is because the traditional man doesn’t care about the opinions of other people; he is apathetic. Therefore, he doesn’t see the need to be something he’s not (smartly dressed and distinguished).

The use of a stereotype is what makes the advert funny because the stereotype is being exaggerated. This can be seen when the men are ripping their pants off and throwing them into a fire- this wouldn’t normally happen in reality.

This advert would appeal to people in the demographic groups E-C2 (Unskilled- plumbers, builders). The reason for this is because some of the men in the advert were working as builders so men who work as builders in reality would enjoy seeing how their job is mocked. This is because traditional men like to mock others so as a result they will find the BK advert funny as it is a way for them to make fun of other people.

The psychographic groups which are being targeted are the aspirer and the explorer.  The aspirer because in the advert, BK has a crowd of fans and aspirers like popularity. This means that people who eat BK burgers will get many friends. However, the aspirer won’t like  the advert because they care a lot about their appearance so due to the childish behaviour of the men in the advert, they will believe the BK won’t make them look sophisticated so they won’t eat the burgers. The  reason why the explorer  is being targeted is because explorers like to try new things so if they see a new burger advertised, they will want to try it.

The Representation of Females

The females featured in the advert are the supporters and the cheerleaders. They are also the “reward”. The reason why they are the cheerleaders and supporters is because some of them are standing at the side cheering the men on and the purpose of a cheerleader is to support and motivate.

The women in the commercial are wearing tight pink tracksuits, short cheerleading outfits and figure-hugging dresses. The clothes they are wearing make them fit into the following stereotypes: The glamorous assistants, “eye candy”, girly and weak. This is because the glamorous assistants are only there to make the leading male look good and pink is quite a girly colour which in turn makes them look very feminine. The reason they are “eye candy” is because they are wearing short and/or tight clothes which show their feminine form.

The women in the advert are meant to symbolise rewards. This can be seen in the below picture where a woman wearing a tight pink tracksuit is tempting a man dragging a very heavy object behind him with a BK burger. This shows that once the man gets the burger, he will also get the girl, thus making her the reward.

  • The females in the advert are marginalised because they do not have an important role- they are the background characters and/or the assistants. This means that the only reason they are in the advert is to support the men and to look weak while doing so.

The advert could appeal to women who are rebellious. This is because they won’t like being told that they can’t eat the burger so to prove to men that they can also eat the burger, they will eat the burger in order to prove a point. On the other hand, the advert wouldn’t appeal to female reformers and feminists. This is because reformers want change and equality so they won’t like the men showing that they are the better gender. This advert wouldn’t appeal to feminists because they wouldn’t like the idea of women being portrayed as weak.

The Psychographic Profiles

The psychographic profiles being targeted are the explorer, the aspirer and the struggler. The explorer is being targeted because explorers like trying new things and if they see a new burger being advertised, they will want to try it. This is because they like discovery and the tasting of that BK burger will be the discovery of a new flavour. The aspirer is being targeted because aspirers care a lot about their status. As the men eating their burgers had many friends, the aspirer would feel like trying the burger because then they’d believe that by eating the BK burger they’d gain friends and therefore, popularity/status. The struggler is being targeted because burgers are a form of junk food and strugglers eat mainly junk food as they don’t feel the need to think about what the impact of too much junk food can do to the body.

This advert promotes stereotypes because the stereotypes being presented in the advert are the strong, traditional man and the fragile woman. This shows that the reformers are definitely not the target audience because reformers want change and equality which means that they will feel annoyed that BK are not presenting men and women as equals; men are presented as superior and women are presented as inferior.

Social Class
The main male in the advert is wearing a shirt with rolled-up sleeves and the top button undone, while the other people in the restaurant are wearing smart, formal clothing such as dresses and suits. If the main male is compared to the waiter, we will be able to tell that even the waiter is of higher class than the customer as the waiter is wearing a crisp white shirt with smart black trousers. We can tell from the rolling up of the main male’s sleeves that he is prepared to eat with his hands because people normally roll up their sleeves when they are about to get their hands dirty/messy. The other people in the restaurant aren’t taking such precautions as they are prepared to eat with knives and forks.

When the main male gets served, he sees only a minimal portion of food arranged elegantly on his plate. When he sees this, he looks disappointed with the size of the food and the type of food. He then immediately stands up which tells us that he is annoyed with the slight portion of food arranged delicately on his plate.

We can tell he feels uncomfortable in the restaurant because when he sees the small portion of food, he stands up and leaves the restaurant. This tells us that he may have felt embarrassed that he was the only person dressed like he was going to get his hands dirty- he’s wearing casual clothing while everyone else is wearing formal clothing. This means that everyone else was prepared to eat with the etiquette required when eating in a professional setting.

From this, we can see that the man would probably prefer to eat a burger because rolled-up sleeves indicate that a person is ready to eat with their hands so they don’t want to get their sleeves dirty.

In conclusion, the social class of BK burgers is middle class and lower class. One of the reasons for this is the fact that upper class people prefer to eat in distinguished restaurants (like the one shown in the advert) as they are rich and therefore have a lot of money to spend on expensive food. This also tells us that they are in the social classes of B-A as these are the people who earn the most amount of money out of all the social classes so they will be able to afford the food . This means that these sophisticated people will frown upon the idea of eating in a fast food restaurant with their hands as many rich people don’t like to get their hands dirty. This shows us that  they will be just as uncomfortable as the casually dressed man eating in the classy restaurant because they will be out of their element as they will be dining within an environment that is unfamiliar to them (upper class- haute cuisine restaurants, middle class- fast food restaurants).

Monday, 3 December 2012

My Crew Role

I am going to take the role of Director. This means that I am in charge of the creative aspects of our mockumentary; I have to turn the written script into images and sounds. I'm also in charge of shaping our mockumentary (i.e. putting everything together) which involves script editing and shot selection. 
 I am going to work closely with the camera person and assistant director in my group. These roles belong to Shana, Victoria and Carly at different points of our mockumentary.
I will need to work with the camera person because I have the overall decision on what camera angles will be used and as the camera person will be using these camera angles, I will need to tell them which angles are going to be used at different parts of our mockumentary.
I will need to work with the assistant director because she is my right hand person. This means that she is responsible for making sure that my artistic ambitions are achieved by providing logistical, organisational and time management support.
I will make a good director because I have a very vivid imagination. This means that I will find it easy to make my ideas come to life and flourish. I am also a very motivating team leader; I am always cheerful so I try to make people around me cheerful. Another reason why I will make a good director is because I take other people's ideas into consideration. This is due to the fact that I listen respectfully to others and if there is more than one general idea, I try to incorporate all of the separate ideas until they form one main idea.  

Friday, 23 November 2012

Evaluating My Presentation


Evaluating My Presentation:

On Monday, we worked in our groups to deliver a pitch about our mockumentary. I decided to take the lead by discussing the storyline and talking about one of the characters (KayDee). I delivered my part of the presentation with confidence and ease.

One of the skills that I used was appropriate tone. I did this well because I emphasised certain words. I could do this skill better by exaggerating more to thoroughly engage the audience.

A second skill that I used was clear diction. I did this skill well because I knew what I was talking about so it was easy for me to pronounce the words that I used. I could do this skill better by using hand gestures and facial expressions to make the audience understand my ideas better.

A third skill that I used was eye contact with the audience. I did this skill well because I didn’t read straight off my paper which meant that my audience was engaged. I could do this skill better by using audience interaction; I could ask them questions to engage them in our presentation more.

A fourth skill that I used was projection of my voice. I did this skill well because I spoke loudly and clearly which meant that my audience could hear me and understand me. I could do this skill better by using different pitches e.g. low/high, as well as volume, when necessary to create a particular mood.

One skill that I didn’t use effectively was facial expressions. This is because my facial expression stayed the same throughout the presentation (happy). Jade also said that I need to develop this skill because she said that I need to “use facial expressions to communicate with the audience”. She said that I could do this by “practicing my facial expressions in front of a mirror to improve them”. I agree with this developmental feedback which is why I am going to practice a variety of different facial expressions in front of a mirror so that when I next do a presentation, I will be able to make my audience feel a range of different emotions.

A second skill that I need to improve is the use of hand gestures. This is because I didn’t memorise my script which meant that I had to hold the paper. Someone else in the class also said that I need to improve this skill and they said that I could do this by “putting down my paper”. This developmental feedback isn’t very clear because they didn’t say what would cause me to put down my paper i.e. memorising my script. However, I do agree with them and now I know that I should always memorise whatever I am going to say: I will be able to use more presentation skills this way.

Overall, I believe that I used appropriate tone, clear diction, eye contact and projection of my voice well. To improve, I need to use hand gestures and a range of facial expressions.